Many many moons ago I was in the TV industry, editor, producer and video eng. Now this was way back when we had 2" tape and 16mm.
Rules though remain the same when it comes to editing video's, and pictures.
What are you trying to accomplish with your video?
Is it going all over the place without any thought put into it.
In other words; Tell it like a story as you would tell it to a friend does it make sense?
Why show the same images time after time after time.
Twice maybe 3 times ok, but it better be interesting!
Does music reflect your video, and what age group?
Unless it's a video that's spectacular and holds the audience, vocals are taboo unless it relates to the subject video.
Is ZZ top good for nature scenes? Most likely not, however Enya would be better.
Length way way to long.
As video has become increasingly ubiquitous, we as viewers have increasingly high expectations, and shorter attention spans.
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I would like to see you redo the video, and I think you would and could do a spectacular job at it.
Editing takes time, never rush yourself!
I'm not a Hollywood producer guru, but I watch a lot of how they produce their films and commercials.
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Also look up rule of thirds for video and photography.